For this updated version of my double page spread I have made all of the text much smaller and moved the pull quote. I moved the pull quote because I thought it looked a bit silly where it was first placed. I also added text at the top where there is an introduction about the featured artist. I'm struggling to fit anymore text on and am considering taking a new photo at this late stage. I might just leave it after I get more feedback to see what I could do to improve.
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