Thursday, 15 January 2015

Drafting & Planning: Feedback to First Draft

My magazine was assessed by a classmate and they gave me feedback on what I did well for my magazine and what I needed to improve on.
They said that on my cover page there was good photography, the colour scheme is consistent, I have conformed to the codes and conventions and my cover line stands out and is noticeable. To improve they said I should make some fonts bolder on certain cover lines and articles to make them stand out. From this I know now that I should bold certain things such as names of artists to make it more clear.

For my double page spread they said that my colour scheme is still consistent and so is my good photography. They also said the effect of blurred lights on my image is great. To improve they said I could make the name of the band bigger in the corner but I'm not sure if I will do this yet because I saw a magazine double page spread that ad the artists name smaller in the corner so I will need to think about this.

For my contents page they said I had great photography again and the colour scheme was still consistent. To improve I need to add more detail and more pages if I want my magazine to be monthly. I think I may just have my magazine as a weekly one but if not I will add more pages up to 50/60 pages. 

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